dc.contributor.advisor | 尤雪瑛 | zh_TW |
dc.contributor.author (Authors) | 黃淑萍 | zh_TW |
dc.contributor.author (Authors) | Huang, Shu Ping | en_US |
dc.creator (作者) | 黃淑萍 | zh_TW |
dc.creator (作者) | Huang, Shu Ping | en_US |
dc.date (日期) | 2008 | en_US |
dc.date.accessioned | 19-Sep-2009 13:05:34 (UTC+8) | - |
dc.date.available | 19-Sep-2009 13:05:34 (UTC+8) | - |
dc.date.issued (上傳時間) | 19-Sep-2009 13:05:34 (UTC+8) | - |
dc.identifier (Other Identifiers) | G0094951002 | en_US |
dc.identifier.uri (URI) | https://nccur.lib.nccu.edu.tw/handle/140.119/37297 | - |
dc.description (描述) | 碩士 | zh_TW |
dc.description (描述) | 國立政治大學 | zh_TW |
dc.description (描述) | 英國語文學系英語教學碩士在職專班 | zh_TW |
dc.description (描述) | 94951002 | zh_TW |
dc.description (描述) | 97 | zh_TW |
dc.description.abstract (摘要) | 教師回饋在學生的寫作過程中是很重要的,所以如何給予有效的回饋是個值得探討的議題。這個研究是在評估老師的書面回饋對於高中生多次文稿英文寫作練習的成效。桃園市某所國立高中的高三學生,一班共36位 (男生27位,女生9位) 參與這項為期從2007年九月到2008年一月的研究。教師回饋的方式是在第一次文稿上給予代號批改及評語,在第二次文稿上直接寫上正確答案及評語,在第三次文稿上直接給予答案並附上評語。老師不會在每次的文稿上評分,而學生在繳交改寫的文稿時要附上心得單。這項研究包含敘述文體的前測及後測、兩份參與者對教師回饋的問卷、及參與者的訪談。研究結果如下:第一,這種教師回饋對於整體的寫作品質上的進步有所貢獻。第二,雖然這樣的教師回饋對於整體的寫作正確度上沒有明顯的改善,但在時態及標點符號方面卻有正向的影響。第三,參與者對於這樣的教師回饋抱持著正面的態度。最後,討論此研究在教學上的意涵及對未來研究的建議。 | zh_TW |
dc.description.abstract (摘要) | Teacher feedback is important in students’ writing process, so how to give effective teacher feedback is an issue worth investigation. The present study assessed the effect of teacher written feedback on high school students’ multi-draft English writing practice. A class of 36 seniors (27 boys and 9 girls) in a national senior high school in Taoyuan City participated in this study from Sep. 2007 through Jan. 2008. The teacher feedback was to give coded correction and comments on Draft 1, to offer direct correction and comments on Draft 2, and to provide direct correction and comments on Draft 3. Grades were assigned randomly and the participants had to submit cover sheets in revision. The study included the pre-test and the post-test on narrative writing, two questionnaires on the participants’ perceptions of the teacher feedback, and interviews. The results are as follows: First, this teacher feedback contributed to significant improvement in the overall writing quality. Second, this teacher feedback yielded no significant difference in the overall writing accuracy, but it had some positive effect on tense and punctuation. Third, the participants took a positive attitude toward this teacher feedback. Finally, some implications for teaching and suggestions for future research were discussed. | en_US |
dc.description.tableofcontents | Acknowledgements………………………………………………………………… iv Chinese Abstract…………………………………………………………………… vii English Abstract……………………………………………………………………. viii Chapter One: Introduction………………………………………….………………..1 Background and Motivation……………………………….………………….1 Purpose of the Study………………………………….……………………….2 Significance of the Study………...………………………….………………...3 Research Questions…….……………………………….……………...……...4 Definition of Terms……………………………………….…………………...4 Chapter Two: Literature Review……………………………….………………….....5 Writing Pedagogy……………………………………………………………...5 Product Model…………………………………………………………..6 Process Model…………………………………………………………..7 Feedback………………………………………………………………………9 Peer Feedback………………………………………………………….10 Teacher Feedback………………………………………………………11 Content and Form………………………………………………………12 Direct Correction and Indirect Correction……………………………...17 Marginal Comments and End Comments………………………………21 Cover Sheets……………………………………………………………24 Feedback Studies in Taiwan…………………………………………………..26 Chapter Three: Methodology………………………………………………………..32 Feedback Framework…………………………………………………………32 Correction………………………………………………………………32 Comments………………………………………………………………34 Scores……………………………………………………………...……35 Participants…………………………………………………………………….36 Instruments…………………………………………………………………….36 A Scoring Guide……………………………………………………..….36 Pre-test and Post-test……………………………………………………37 Student Response Questionnaires………………………………………37 Interviews…………………………………………………………….…40 Procedure………………………………………………………………………41 Data Analysis………………………………………………………………..…44 Chapter Four: Results and Discussion…………………………………………….…46 The Effect of Teacher Feedback on Overall Writing Quality……….……....…46 The Effect of Teacher Feedback on Writing Accuracy…………………...……49 The Students’ Perceptions of Teacher Feedback……………………..………..56 Questionnaires………………………………………………..…………56 Interviews………………………………………………………….……75 Chapter Five: Conclusions…………………………………………...………………86 Summary………………………………………………………………………86 Implications………………………………….…………………...……………88 Limitations…………………………………………………………….………89 References……………………………………………….………………...…………92 Appendixes……………………………………………………………...……………99 | zh_TW |
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dc.source.uri (資料來源) | http://thesis.lib.nccu.edu.tw/record/#G0094951002 | en_US |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | 教師回饋 | zh_TW |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | 英文寫作 | zh_TW |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | 多次文稿 | zh_TW |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | 批改 | zh_TW |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | 評語 | zh_TW |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | 心得單 | zh_TW |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | 分數 | zh_TW |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | teacher feedback | en_US |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | English writing | en_US |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | multi-draft | en_US |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | error correction | en_US |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | comments | en_US |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | cover sheets | en_US |
dc.subject (關鍵詞) | grades | en_US |
dc.title (題名) | 教師回饋在多次文稿寫作上的成效--以台灣高中英文課為例 | zh_TW |
dc.title (題名) | The Efficacy of Teacher Feedback on Multi-draft Writing--A Case Study in Taiwan High School English Class | en_US |
dc.type (資料類型) | thesis | en |
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