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題名 教師回饋對新竹縣國小六年級學童英文句型寫作影響之研究
An investigation into the effects of teacher feedback on English sentence writing of grade six elementary school students in Hsin Chu county
作者 許淑芬
Hsu, Shu Fen
貢獻者 許炳煌
Sheu, Ping Huang
許淑芬
Hsu, Shu Fen
關鍵詞 句型寫作
Sentence Writing
日期 2012
上傳時間 3-Jun-2013 17:23:18 (UTC+8)
摘要 本研究在探討兩種不同教師回饋對新竹縣國小六年級學童英文句型寫作之影響以及此兩種回饋對學生英語學習態度與動機的影響。此研究以來自新竹縣某國小六年級兩個班級學生為研究對象，此二班級隨機指派為實驗組及控制組。實驗組實施習作批改時的間接回饋而對照組則實施傳統直接回饋，每週均批改一次習作。經過14週的回饋後，兩組皆進行英文句型寫作測驗並施以英語學習態度與動機問卷;3週後再進行英文句型寫作延宕測驗。研究結果顯示，學生受過教師的間接回饋批改後在英文句型寫作之正確率上有顯著進步，此顯著進步也表現在延宕測驗中的介系詞題型；但其對訂正習作上錯誤則表現顯著焦慮。希望本研究能為英語老師在教學實務上提供助益。
The present study mainly aimed at investigating the effects of two different types of teacher feedback on English sentence writing accuracy. Meanwhile this paper also aimed at examining learners’ attitudes of the two different types of teacher feedback, and the changes of learners’ attitudes and motivation towards English learning after the implementation of different teacher feedbacks.
Two sixth-grade classes in Hsin Chu County were randomly assigned to be the experimental group and the control group. The experimental group received indirect feedback (IDF) on their workbook while the control group received traditional direct feedback (DF) once a week. After the 14-week treatment, an English writing proficiency test and an English learning attitudes and motivation questionnaire were administrated to examine learners’ sentence writing accuracy and their learning attitudes and motivations respectively. Finally, a retention test was conducted in 3 weeks later to know the retention effect of two types of teacher feedback.
The findings showed that the IDF had helped students gained significant progress on sentence writing accuracy. Moreover, the significant improvement was also presented on the aspect of preposition in the retention test. However, the IDF group expressed significant anxiety towards correcting errors on workbooks after the treatment of IDF. Hopefully, the findings of the present study may provide English teachers with some useful pedagogical implications.
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描述 碩士
國立政治大學
英語教學碩士在職專班
98951020
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dc.contributor.advisor 許炳煌zh_TW
dc.contributor.advisor Sheu, Ping Huangen_US
dc.contributor.author (Authors) 許淑芬zh_TW
dc.contributor.author (Authors) Hsu, Shu Fenen_US
dc.creator (作者) 許淑芬zh_TW
dc.creator (作者) Hsu, Shu Fenen_US
dc.date (日期) 2012en_US
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dc.description (描述) 碩士zh_TW
dc.description (描述) 國立政治大學zh_TW
dc.description (描述) 英語教學碩士在職專班zh_TW
dc.description (描述) 98951020zh_TW
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dc.description.abstract (摘要) 本研究在探討兩種不同教師回饋對新竹縣國小六年級學童英文句型寫作之影響以及此兩種回饋對學生英語學習態度與動機的影響。此研究以來自新竹縣某國小六年級兩個班級學生為研究對象，此二班級隨機指派為實驗組及控制組。實驗組實施習作批改時的間接回饋而對照組則實施傳統直接回饋，每週均批改一次習作。經過14週的回饋後，兩組皆進行英文句型寫作測驗並施以英語學習態度與動機問卷;3週後再進行英文句型寫作延宕測驗。研究結果顯示，學生受過教師的間接回饋批改後在英文句型寫作之正確率上有顯著進步，此顯著進步也表現在延宕測驗中的介系詞題型；但其對訂正習作上錯誤則表現顯著焦慮。希望本研究能為英語老師在教學實務上提供助益。zh_TW
dc.description.abstract (摘要) The present study mainly aimed at investigating the effects of two different types of teacher feedback on English sentence writing accuracy. Meanwhile this paper also aimed at examining learners’ attitudes of the two different types of teacher feedback, and the changes of learners’ attitudes and motivation towards English learning after the implementation of different teacher feedbacks.
Two sixth-grade classes in Hsin Chu County were randomly assigned to be the experimental group and the control group. The experimental group received indirect feedback (IDF) on their workbook while the control group received traditional direct feedback (DF) once a week. After the 14-week treatment, an English writing proficiency test and an English learning attitudes and motivation questionnaire were administrated to examine learners’ sentence writing accuracy and their learning attitudes and motivations respectively. Finally, a retention test was conducted in 3 weeks later to know the retention effect of two types of teacher feedback.
The findings showed that the IDF had helped students gained significant progress on sentence writing accuracy. Moreover, the significant improvement was also presented on the aspect of preposition in the retention test. However, the IDF group expressed significant anxiety towards correcting errors on workbooks after the treatment of IDF. Hopefully, the findings of the present study may provide English teachers with some useful pedagogical implications.		en_US
dc.description.tableofcontents Table of Contents
Dedication Page………………………………………………………………………iii
Acknowledgments………………………………………………………iv
Table of Contents……………………………………………………v
List of Tables…………………………………………………………viii
List of Figures………………………………………………………ix
Chinese Abstract………………………………………………………x
English Abstract………………………………………………………xi
Chapter One: Introduction……………………………………………………………1
Background and Motivation…………………………………1
Purpose of the Study…………………………………………5
Research Questions……………………………………………7
Definition of Terms…………………………………………8
Significance of the Study………………………………………10
Chapter Two: Literature Review………………………………13
The Concept of Writing……………………………………13
Writing Models………………………………………………………15
Writing Pedagogy in Taiwan………………………………………20
Grammatical Errors and Corrections …………………………22
Common Grammatical Errors in EFL Writing ………………23
Different Correction Ways of Grammatical Errors………26
Teacher feedback ……………………………………………………29
The Concept of Teacher feedback………………………………29
The Error-oriented Feedbacks……………………………………30
The Content-oriented Feedbacks…………………………………32
The Combination of Two Feedback Types………………………33
Different Teacher Feedback Formats……………………………35
Related Studies on Teacher Feedback……………………38
Studies in ESL Context………………………………………………39
Studies in EFL Context……………………………………43
Studies Related to Students’ Attitudes…………47
Chapter Summary…………………………………………………49
Chapter Three: Methodology………………………………………51
Participants……………………………………………………………51
Instrument………………………………………………………………52
English Writing Proficiency Test (EWPT) …………………52
English Learning Attitudes Questionnaire (ELAQ) ………57
Procedures…………………………………………………………60
Treatment……………………………………………………………………65
Five Targeted Errors……………………………………………………65
Two Types of Teacher Feedback………………………………………66
Data Analysis………………………………………………………………68
Chapter Four: Results……………………………………………………69
The Effect of Indirect Teacher Feedback(IDF)…………………69
The Effect of Direct Teacher Feedback(DF)………………………73
The Comparison on Post- and Retention Test of IDF and DF Groups……………………………………………………………………………76
The Comparison of the Student Attitudes toward Two Feedback Types………………………………………………………………………………77
Chapter Five: Discussion…………………………………………………87
Research Question1: Did the DF group perform better in the post-EWPT than in the pre-EWPT? In addition, did the group perform better in the retention EWPT than
in the post-EWPT? If yes, in what ways?…………………………87
Research Question2: Did the DF group perform better in the post-EWPT than in
the pre-EWPT? In addition, did the group perform better in the retention EWPT than in the post-EWPT? If yes, in what ways? ……………………………………………………………………………90
Research Question3: Did the IDF group and the DF group perform differently in the post EWPT? Besides, did the two groups perform differently in the retention EWPT? If yes, in what ways?………………………………………………………………91
Research Question4: Did the IDF group and the DF group express different
attitudes toward the treatment? If yes, in what ways?……………………………………………………………………………………92
Chapter Six: Conclusions……………………………………………………………………97
Main Findings…………………………………………………………………97
Pedagogical Implications……………………………………………………………………97
Limitation and Suggestions………………………………………………99
References……………………………………………………………………102
Appendixes……………………………………………………………………112
Appendix A: English Writing Proficiency Test……………113
Appendix B: English Learning Attitudes Questionnaire (Chinese Version)…………………………………………………………115
Appendix C: English Learning Attitudes Questionnaire (English Version)…………………………………………………………117
Appendix D: Suggestions for English Writing Proficiency Test………………………………………………………………………………119
Appendix E: Suggestions for English Learning Attitudes Questionnaire…………………………………………………………………120
Appendix F: Essay Correction Code (ECC)……………………121







List of Tables
Table 1 Sample Questions of EWPT…………….………….…...……………...…….55
Table 2 A Correction Guide.…………………………..……………………………...62
Table 3 Paired T-Test on Pre- and Post-EWPT of IDF Group………….……......…...70
Table 4 Paired T-Test of Each Error Type on Pre- and Post-EWPT of IDF Group.......71
Table 5 Paired T-Test on Post- and Retention EWPT of IDF Group……………...…..72
Table 6 Paired T-Test of Each Error Type on Post- and Retention EWPT of IDF
Group………………………………………………………………………….73
Table 7 Paired T-Test on Pre- and Post-EWPT of DF Group…………………............74
Table 8 Paired T-Test on Post- and Retention EWPT of DF Group………….…….....74
Table 9 Independent Sample T-Test on Post- Tests of IDF and DF groups……...…...76
Table 10 Independent Sample T-Test on Retention Tests of IDF and DF Groups…....77
Table 11 Independent Sample T-Test on Main Section of IDF and DF Groups…....…78
Table 12 Independent Sample T-Test on Section 1 of ELAQ of IDF and DF
Groups…………………………………………………………..………..….79
Table 13 Independent Sample T-Test on Section 2 of ELAQ of IDF and DF Groups..80
Table 14 Independent Sample T-Test on Section 3 and 4 of ELAQ of IDF and DF Groups……………………………………………………………………….82
Table 15 Independent Sample T-Test on Section 5 of ELAQ of IDF and DF Groups..83
Table 16 Independent Sample T-Test on Section 6 of ELAQ of IDF and DF Groups..84
Table 17 Independent Sample T-Test on Section 7 of ELAQ of IDF and DF
Groups...............................................................................................................85




List of Figures
Figure 1 Flow Chart of the Study…………………………….……………..…….…..60
Figure 2 Revising Procedure of the Unsuccessful Revision………..……………...….62
Figure 3 A Sample of IDF………………………………...………..….………………67
Figure 4 A Sample of DF………………………………….……….……...….……….67		zh_TW
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